OnTRACK English I Writing: Revision Strategies

  • Subject(s): ELA & Reading
  • Grade Range: HS - 12
  • Release date: 04-15-2016
  • Tags: tone, style, simile, revision strategies, revision, purpose, polish, metaphor, figurative language, diction, audience, simple sentence, revising, prepositional phrase, preposition, phrase, participle, independent clause, conjunction, compound sentence, appositive phrase, adverb, adjective, parallel structure, main clause, infinitive, gerund, thesis statement, thesis, specific, position, essays, essay, defensible, debatable, sentence variety, sentence combining, sentence, complex sentence, adverbial phrase, adverbial clause, adjectival clause, strategies for revising, relative pronoun, paraphrase, imperative, clause, subordinate clause, predicate, dependent clause, compound-complex sentences, compound sentences, complex sentences, strategies for revision


OnTRACK English I Writing, Module 7, Lessons 1–3, Practice Lessons 1–5. Students revise drafts to improve style, word choice, figurative language, sentence variety, and subtlety of meaning after rethinking how well questions of purpose, audience, and genre have been addressed.


ELA.E1.13.C, ELA.E1.9.C